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PostSubject: Contest entry   Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:00 pm

Well here is my contest entry for the ship part.

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Name: The Vortex

Class: Stealth Ship

Crew: 1 Pilot

Weapons: 2 EZ laser cannons, 2 4A laser missile launchers

Description: This ship is a stealthy ship piloted by rouge unnamed Jedi who left the Jedi order after Order 66 and now has turned to a mercenary way of life. His ship was made from the parts of various ships and cruisers he commandeered during his exile in the outer rim. This ship is equipped with many capabilities such as cloaking devices and heavy armaments; it is an unmatched threat in the galaxy.




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PostSubject: Re: Contest entry   Tue Feb 01, 2011 10:59 pm

What is the ship called? What is it's background? Who flies it? What time period of SW is it?

Those are some questions you should answer, in Story form. It makes it more interesting.

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PostSubject: Re: Contest entry   Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:52 am

The_Custom_One wrote:
What is the ship called? What is it's background? Who flies it? What time period of SW is it?

Those are some questions you should answer, in Story form. It makes it more interesting.


Ok I will be right back (goes and writes a back story) I am back now you like?
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PostSubject: Re: Contest entry   Wed Feb 02, 2011 1:15 pm

I like it! It's good. Any more pictures?

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PostSubject: Re: Contest entry   Wed Feb 02, 2011 1:57 pm

Fithboy wrote:
I like it! It's good. Any more pictures?

Yes !





Front open.


Back open.


Side with landing gear.

Hope you enjoy

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PostSubject: Re: Contest entry   Wed Feb 02, 2011 2:07 pm

To improve I would get rid of the white, black and try to make it less bulky. Apart from that it's great! I especially like the droid Smile.

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