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PostSubject: The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.   Wed Oct 20, 2010 2:58 pm

Okay, so here is my first creation (in a while) to be entered on here!
The invasion of the Mining Planet Polis Massa.

The overall view.

The inside of the building.

The scared and hiding miner.

The whole MOC without minifigures.

A close-up of the Door.


C&C welcome!
Oh, and enjoy!
And when I get a chance, I will upload these to my Flickr page!

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PostSubject: Re: The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.   Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:14 pm

Pretty good, my only complaint is that the building is just a giant block on the outside. Add a few details. Smile Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:09 am

It's okay. A bit simple, but the floor is good Smile.

(Next time don't copy the description from CABG Wink )

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PostSubject: Re: The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:41 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:
Pretty good, my only complaint is that the building is just a giant block on the outside. Add a few details. Smile Wink

Like what type? What could I add on outside?

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PostSubject: Re: The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:49 pm

A nice vignette, The_Custom_One - it's got a lot of fantastic details. I'm digging the interior control panel, the trans-blue door, and especially the scared soldier - good use of the disconnected-legs technique.

I think you could even take it to the next level with a bit more work on two things. First, as others have mentioned, the building looks like a giant cube from the outside. Check out some other MOC buildings and perhaps steal some greebling or design ideas from them (they say that great artists copy, but the best artists steal Wink ).

With your skill level, I really think you could hit up the ground for some more detail too - I'm generally a huge fan of the studly-look, but all the studs-up construction of the mine grounds distracts a bit from some of your other details. I wouldn't go all smooth like you did for the tiled interior, but perhaps something in between.

Keep up the nice work, bro - you know how to build!

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PostSubject: Re: The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.   Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:54 pm

Put a bunch of rocks to the left of the building. Wink
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