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PostSubject: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:11 pm

Here's a little moc I just did:


It's a battle between the sepies and a few clones (as seen in pic).
Sgt. Crack is commanding everything.
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:24 pm

I can't even see the separatists!


HEY! That's my stormtrooper! :lol:






I bet I could do better.......................... maybe...


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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:26 pm

No it's not, want your own get your own, think there's a few in ebay.
There's no sepies because there in the farouts!
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:30 pm

You said it was a battle between them and the SEPIES!

AND IT WAS MY STORMIE AT ONE POINT!
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:32 pm

The sepies aren'y in the outpost, your's is put away!
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:50 pm

Hey, are those the stormies you are trading me? Razz
Looks good. Make the picture a bit clearer, it would be better.

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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 4:54 pm

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Hey, are those the stormies you are trading me? Razz
Looks good. Make the picture a bit clearer, it would be better.
Yeah those are the ones Razz , how can I make it better?
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 5:10 pm

It's okay... Pretty boring...

To make it clear set your camera on a flat surface or get a better quality camera.
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 5:12 pm

It's a better quality camera, I just moved a bit!
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 18, 2010 5:13 pm

Oh, well then stop moving and it will be clear.
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Wed May 19, 2010 10:25 am

O.K. MOC. Could be better. Wink

He must have shaky hands. Very Happy: I am the same way. Razz Just keep trying until you get it right. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Wed May 19, 2010 10:30 am

I need more pictures!! AHHH!! (? I feel crazy).

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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Wed May 19, 2010 7:57 pm

It's meh... The clone are a bit messy, but I might as well get to the point of this comment.
Here are some of the things you need to fix... Wink
-I don't like the use of the different colored baseplates on the same level, it doesn't really look right nor looks good. Now if the courtyardish are is green and you have a black/ grey base plate elevated as a platform/deck area, it would look decent.
-Baseplate placement is another thing that I don't like. The plates look scatered. Try to keep the scene on a square or rectangle group of plates, etc...
-Angles... This is another thing that kinda bothers me. The destoryed walls, etc, need angles. It doesn't look very good if you just put bricks on top of each other randomly.
-Greebles... This scene also needs "some" greebles. It's a battle, I usually expect to see explosions, craters, etc...
-Last but not least...The Figures... It honestly bothers me on how your using stormtroopers in a Clone Wars battle/ scrimage. I judged that it was from the Clone Wars because of the jedi...
Well, that's all I have to say.
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Thu May 20, 2010 3:48 pm

-weeps- I tried my best, nye he he, jk.
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Thu May 20, 2010 3:50 pm

@ SRG. Denal, Why do you have to be so mean to TJ!? It was pretty good!
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Thu May 20, 2010 5:43 pm

@PrivateAllen: I wasn't being mean, I was just giving some constructive critism. Just ideas to help him improve/make it better. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Sat May 22, 2010 1:50 pm

stormtroopertj, if you can't take criticism, then don't post things on here.

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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Mon May 24, 2010 8:53 pm

I'm basicly summing up all the things everyone else said. It's too multicolored, and I have no idea what's going on.


Also, I just want everyone to know that I'm still here. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Mon May 24, 2010 10:05 pm

oooh.... PUUURRRTYYY!!!

Sorry, I was just caught by the multicolored*-ness of it. Seriously, work on that, please. Otherwise, just some stormies on a baseplate. With some walls. YAWN! Tell a story, make it cleaner, DO SOMETHING!

*Please don't delete the colors, mods, I was just Punctuating my point,
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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 25, 2010 6:45 am

^ It's ok just for one word but not for an entire post.

^^ Good to know your still here. I was beginning to think you'd turnned to the Dark Side...

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PostSubject: Re: Outpost 1 under attack   Tue May 25, 2010 4:14 pm

the_customizer wrote:
stormtroopertj, if you can't take criticism, then don't post things on here.
Who said I wasn't taking criticism?
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